Archive for June, 2010
Confession by Bruce Lansky
Confession
by Bruce Lansky
I have a brief confession
that I would like to make.
If I don’t get it off my chest
I’m sure my heart will break.
I didn’t do my reading.
I watched TV instead—
while munching cookies, cakes, and chips
and cinnamon raisin bread.
I didn’t wash the dishes.
I didn’t clean the mess.
Now there are roaches eating crumbs—
a million, more or less.
I didn’t turn the TV off.
I didn’t shut the light.
Just think of all the energy
I wasted through the night.
I feel so very guilty.
I did a lousy job.
I hope my students don’t find out
that I am such a slob.
After reading the first 4 stanzas who do you think is talking?
Who is really talking? How do you know?
How does this poem make you feel after reading it?
The first time I read this poem I thought it was a student that wrote it. Then after I finished reading I realized it was a teacher! It reminded me that sometimes teachers make mistakes too. I was able to visualize everything the teacher was doing because of the descriptive language the poet used. While I was reading I pictured a student in my head doing these things, but at the end the picture changed when I found out it was a teacher.
Posted by Ms. Vought
Class2-206 – Walking Home in a Storm
WALKING HOME IN A STORM
To the beat of the wind,
the trees dance and sway.
The rain seeps down
my raincoat neck,
dripping, dropping
every which way.
I smell the earth all soggy wet.
A boom!
A slash!
A lightning flash!
I scurry along
and slip and trip.
But then I stop
and enjoy each drop.
I taste a raindrop on my cheek.
It’s salty and it’s kind of sweet.
I let myself get wonderfully wet
and I jump in the
next…..
big…..
PUDDLE!
During our poetry unit, we realize that poetry depends on our senses. This poem “Walking Home in a Storm” made me visualize and experience our senses of hearing, touching, tasting, smelling and feeling all at once.
Read this poem and tell me how you feel? Then answer these question.
l. What senses did this poet use?
2. Tell one phrase that describes each of the senses used.
3. Are there any descriptive words that helped you to visualize?
4. What does the mood seem to be (angry, joyous,sad,silly etc.)
5. How do you think the author felt when he wrote this poem? Have you ever felt this way?
6. Can you think of another title for this poem?
posted by Mrs.S.Naidoo – Class 2-206
What I Found in My Desk by Bruce Landsky
A ripe peach with an ugly bruise,
a pair of stinky tennis shoes,
a day-old ham-and-cheese on rye,
a swimsuit that I left to dry,
a pencil that glows in the dark,
some bubble gum found in the park,
a paper bag with cookie crumbs,
an old kazoo that barely hums,
a Spelling test that I almost failed,
a letter I should have mailed
and one more thing, I must confess,
a note from teacher, Clean This Mess!!!
Read this poem and answer the following:
1. Name five things that are in this desk. Then write the words that the poet uses to describe these things that you choose.
2. What words help you to visualize what is in this desk?
3. What do you smell, hear, taste, and feel as you read the poem?
Posted by Ms. B’s Class 2-213
Class 2-212 Sunflakes by Frank Asch
If sunlight fell like snowflakes,
gleaming yellow and so bright,
we could build a sunman,
we could have a sunball fight,
we could watch the sunflakes
drifting in the sky.
We could go sleighing
in the middle of July
through sundrifts and sunbanks,
we could ride a sunmobile,
and we could touch sunflakes-
I wonder how they’d feel.
Do you think you would like to play with sunflakes?
What other activities might you do with sunflakes? Describe them.
Do you think the author is being serious or silly? Tell why you think that.
Mrs. Zolna
What is Red? by Mary O’Neill
We talked about how different colors make us feel a certain way. For example blue makes us feel sad. Now we are going to look at how the color red makes us feel. Read the poem and answer the questions that follow.
What is Red? by Mary O’Neil
Red is sunset
Blazing and bright.
Red is feeling brave
with all your might.
Red is a sunburn
Spot on your nose.
sometimes red
Is a red, red, rose.
Red squiggles out
when you cut your hand.
Red is a brick
and the sound of aband.
Red is hotness
you get inside
when your embarassed
and want to hide.
fire-cracker, fire-engine
fire- flicker red–
and you’re angry
Red runs through your head.
Red is an Indian
a Valentine heart.
the trimmings on
A circus cart.
Red is a lipstick
Red is a shout
Red is a signal
that says “WATCH OUT!”
Red is great big
rubber ball.
Red is the giantest
color of all.
Red is a show-off.
No doubt about it.
but can you imagine
living with out it?
1. List a few things that the author thinks about when she sees red.
2. Do you agree or disagree with the author about the color red? For example, do you think “red is a great big rubber ball”? Why or why not?
3. Why do you think the authorsays ” red is feeling brave with all your might”?
4. Do you like this poem? Why or why not?
5. What would another good title for this poem be?
posted by Ms. Zabar for class 2-210
Today is Very Boring by: Jack Prelutsky
Today is Very Boring
Today is very boring,
it’s a very boring day
there’s nothing much to look at,
there’s nothing much to say,
there’s a peacock on my sneakers,
there’s a penguin on my head,
there’s a dormouse on my doorstep,
I’m going back to bed.
Today is very boring,
it’s boring through and through,
there is absolutelty nothing
that I think I want to do,
I see giants riding rhinos,
and an ogre with a sword,
there’s a dragon blowing smoke rings,
I’m positively bored.
Today is very boring,
I can hardly help but yawn,
there’s a flying saucer landing
in the middle of my lawn,
a volcano just erupted
less than half a mile away,
and I think I feel an eathquake,
it’s a very boring day.
This s a poem by Jack Prelutsky who is my favorite poet. I love the way he uses his imagination and the descriptive words that he uses. When I read it I visualize many things happening. Tell me how you feel about this poem……
- What do you visualize when you read this poem?
- How do you think the author was feeling when he wrote it? Have you ever felt that way?
- What are some of the descriptive words he used to help you visualize?
- What would be another good title for this poem? Do you like this poem? why or why not?
Posted by: Ms. Dalhouse for class 2-211
HECTOR THE COLLECTOR by Shel Silverstein 2-102
Hector the Collector
Collected bits of string,
Collected dolls with broken heads
And rusty bells that would not ring.
Pieces out of picture puzzles,
Bent-up nails and ice-cream sticks,
Twists of wires, worn-out tires,
Paper bags and broken bricks.
Old chipped vases, half shoelaces,
Gatlin’ guns that wouldn’t shoot,
Leaky boats that wouldn’t float
And stopped-up horns that wouldn’t toot.
Butter knives that had no handles,
Copper keys that fit no locks,
Rings that were too small for fingers,
Dried-up leaves and patched-up socks.
Worn-out belts that had no buckles,
‘Lectric trains that had no tracks,
Airplane models, broken bottles,
Three-legged chairs and cups with cracks.
Hector the Collector
Loved these things with all his soul‹
Loved them more than shining diamonds,
Loved them more than glistenin’ gold.
Hector called to all the people,
“Come and share my treasure trunk!”
And all the silly sightless people
Came and looked…and called it junk.
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This is my favorite poem by Shel Silverstein. There are so many emotions and visualizations I go through as I read it. What do you feel when you read it?
1. How do you think the author felt when he was writing this poem? Why?
2. Have you ever felt this way?
3. What descriptive words did the author use to hep you visualize in the poem?
4. What would another good title be for the poem? Why?
5. Do you like this poem? Explain.
Posted by Mrs. Luongo
Mrs. Clark’s Poetry Post
Instructions: Read the poem below. As you read, think about all the things that the poet says he has “stuffed” in him.
I Have All These Parts…
By Arnold Adoff
I have all these parts stuffed in
me
like mama’s chicken
and
biscuits
and
daddy’s apple pie, and a tasty
story
from the family
tree
But I know that tomorrow
morning
I’ll wake up
empty, and hungry for that
next
Bite
of my new
day
Can you really have a story stuffed in you? What do you think the poet means by this?
Posted by Mrs. Clark
New Question:
How can you relate to this poem? What do you have from your family that is “stuffed” in you? Is there a special story in you from your family tree? Is there anything else in you that you got from your family?What is it?
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