Confession by Bruce Lansky
June 21, 2010 at 2:16 pm 62second 16 comments
Confession
by Bruce Lansky
I have a brief confession
that I would like to make.
If I don’t get it off my chest
I’m sure my heart will break.
I didn’t do my reading.
I watched TV instead—
while munching cookies, cakes, and chips
and cinnamon raisin bread.
I didn’t wash the dishes.
I didn’t clean the mess.
Now there are roaches eating crumbs—
a million, more or less.
I didn’t turn the TV off.
I didn’t shut the light.
Just think of all the energy
I wasted through the night.
I feel so very guilty.
I did a lousy job.
I hope my students don’t find out
that I am such a slob.
After reading the first 4 stanzas who do you think is talking?
Who is really talking? How do you know?
How does this poem make you feel after reading it?
The first time I read this poem I thought it was a student that wrote it. Then after I finished reading I realized it was a teacher! It reminded me that sometimes teachers make mistakes too. I was able to visualize everything the teacher was doing because of the descriptive language the poet used. While I was reading I pictured a student in my head doing these things, but at the end the picture changed when I found out it was a teacher.
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1. breanna | September 16, 2010 at 7:42 pm
welcome back p.s62 nice to see you all…
2. breanna | September 16, 2010 at 7:48 pm
I LOVE P.S 62 !!!!!!!!!!!!
3. Amelia | June 22, 2010 at 3:21 pm
I thought that you were a little kid talking.A teacher was talking. At the end he said that i hope that my students don’t find out.I felt like wow.
4. Adam | June 22, 2010 at 3:21 pm
I thought it was a girl at first but now I know it was a teacher because when it said “I hope my students don’t find out that I am such a slob.” This poem made me feel sloppy because everything was messy in the poem.
5. Ali.f | June 22, 2010 at 3:18 pm
I thought that a child was talking because the child didn’t do it’s homework.Now I know that it is a teacher talking because the teacher said that he/she hopes he/her students don’t find out that he/she is a slob.The poem made me feel excited.
6. Kimberly | June 22, 2010 at 3:17 pm
I thought the student was talking in the beginning.At the end the teacher was really talking.I know the teacher was really talking because it said I hope my students don’t find out that I am just a slob.I felt sad when the teacher said I am such a slob.
7. Zipporah.c | June 22, 2010 at 3:17 pm
At first I
thought
that at first
a little boy
was talking.
When I
heard that
when
he/she
were
talking
& when
it said that
I hope my
students
don’t
find out
I am a
slob.
This book
makes me
feel sad.
8. Shyanne & Ivan | June 22, 2010 at 3:16 pm
We thought first it was a little girl/boy talking. We found out it was a teacher because,at the last sentence he/she said,”I hope my students don’t find out!”The poem makes us feel like teachers are sloppy, “Oh No!”
9. KENNEDY & Shanan | June 22, 2010 at 3:16 pm
I thought it was a kid talking in the beginning. A teacher was talking . At the end it tolled me. It made me feel happy.
10. Kevin | June 22, 2010 at 3:15 pm
I think talking in the poem was a boy. It was a teacher talking. She was really talking.When the poem said I hope my students don”t find out I am a slob. When I read this poem I did not want to be a slob.
11. Angelina | June 22, 2010 at 3:13 pm
I thought a girl was talking because when the poem said I ate cookies,chips,and cakes I knew that kids eat junk food.A teacher was actually talking.I know that it was a teacher because at the end of the poem it said I hope my students don’t find out that I am such a slob.I think the poem is funny because it makes me laugh!
12. Carine | June 22, 2010 at 3:12 pm
I thought a kid was talking. I found out it was a teacher talking. She has students in class. This made me feel good.
13. Lizbeth | June 22, 2010 at 3:11 pm
I thought that it was a child talking. The person that was really talking was a teacher. I know that it was a teacher because she/he said I don’t want my students to find out that I am a slob. I felt like the students were going to find out. This poem made me laugh when the teacher called himself/herself a slob!
14. Zipporah | June 21, 2010 at 6:54 pm
In the beginning when it showed that I don’t read I thought at first it was a little boy.Now that the poet explained it I know that it must be a teacher.
15. Rieana | June 21, 2010 at 6:31 pm
I thought that the kid wouldn’t be a teacher. I really liked this poet because the kid was sloppy at first then the kid turned out to be a teacher in his/her adult life.The kid is not that neat.But when he/she is all grown up he/she is a teacher he/she visualizes about that time.So he/she hope his/her students don’t find out.
16. Yesenia | June 21, 2010 at 6:03 pm
I thought a kid was talking when it was watching tv. I know kids watch tv. Now I know it was a teacher talking. It was a teacher talking becuse the poem once said that I don’t want the students to find out I am a slob.I feel upset becuse teachers are smart and mabye they should watch smart stuff. They can get confused and when they teach you don’t know what to learn next.